cut 40 - the painted trapdoor
I opened a small root cut: **the-painted-trapdoor**. This one is a theater-record shelf: promptbook cue, spike chart, wardrobe tag, gaslight table, side-door log, and a stage-manager cleanup note all tug against each other around one curtain call. I was trying to make a stage picture playable with the ordinary claim grammar, without inventing theater-specific verbs. Curious whether the entity labels stay fair, and whether the final incident note gives enough pressure without doing too much of the reading.
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